About

Hi there! I’m Ryan, and this is my first sims 3 written legacy! I know, the sims 4 is coming out soon, and its pretty lame to start a new legacy now. But, I’m not going to be buying the sims 4 so I promise I will finish this legacy. Now, let me tell you a bit about my story.

  • I won’t be playing with rules. I will do what I need to tell the story.
  • There will probably only be 10 generations.
  • This story will have adult themes, nothing too bad but I will warn you if anything too adult is coming, so you can skip it.
  • I am not my characters. The views of my characters are not necessarily the same as mine, so if one of my characters says something that offends you, don’t blame me. I am not the people in my stories.
  • I play with mods, and this is a supernatural legacy, so there will be things like same-sex pregnancy and hybrid sims.
  • My sims will be colorful, but not necessarily berry.
  • I will not be starting on an empty lot, for story purposes.
  • I have all expansions and TL.
  • I will not be keeping score
  • Heirs can be male or female, vampire or fairy, or both.
  • There will be heir/heiress votes, unless only one child is born or eligible.
  • I will be creating everyone in town, and I will put your own sims in my town if you want.
  • Any comments are appreciated πŸ™‚
  • All heirs/heiresses will be up for download.
  • My Simblr
  • My ask.fm for the family
  • I use custom content, if you want to know where I got something I will try and find it for you, but I use so many different sites it might be a little hard.
  • If you want a sim that isn’t an heir/heiress, let me know and I’ll be glad to upload them πŸ™‚
  • Anything here is subject to change throughout the story.

I hope you enjoy my legacy, Thanks for stopping by πŸ™‚

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7 thoughts on “About

  1. Hi Paige!
    My name’s Anna and I’ve been reading through your story (I’m sort of hoovering around different Sims 3 legacy’s since I’m interested in one day writing my own) and I thought that I would leave some constructive criticism.
    I’m a freelance writer so to speak so I like to help people improve, hope you don’t mind:

    After reading through generation 1 – 3 I have come to realize you’ve got a lot of creativity. Really, you’ve got a very thinking and creative mind and that’s a great thing πŸ˜€

    But I have to say that when it comes to story construction it feels weaker. Plots just come and go, fly right in your face along with character turns that seem to be taken out of the blue.
    It really takes me right out of the story when I feel that plot elements are brushed over (like the royal plot chapter in generation 1, I still can’t wrap my head around that).

    I guess my biggest criticisms on this is in generation 2 (the entire plotline until you’re halfway done)
    *spoiler* (for people reading comments)
    To have Clover make a 180 out of nowhere (her insane jealousy springs literary out of nowhere) and in the mean time have River brush over one girl to get to another was just… weird.
    it felt like River was not that sort of person and even though we see him feel guilty, it sort of felt more like Clover was going to be replaced and the rest of the chapter was to dehumanize her so it felt “right” for River to make his decisions.
    Do you understand what I mean?

    I’m sorry if I sound harsh with this criticism, that is not how it’s mean to be taken.
    The past is the past with writing (believe me I’ve written a whole lot of stories i’m not proud of) but I think that if you wrap your head a little more around plot structure and character development you can make a truly great story!

    Keep going and keep the passion because you really got it and just need to improve to make it πŸ˜€

    • Hi Anna, thank you for the comment, it was a nice surprise πŸ™‚ I understand the royal thing was a little confusing, but I’m not entirely done with that aspect of the Fae’s history and it will be making a return in the future. I also understand what you mean about Generation 2, now that I think about it I should’ve shown more about Clover and her childhood. Hero mentioned a few times that he saw signs of erratic behavior when she was a child, maybe I should’ve had a flashback or something during Prim’s generation to foreshadow that. Don’t worry, you don’t sound harsh! I’m glad you commented, your criticism was instructive and I’ll be keeping this in mind while I continue writing. I hope to hear more from you in the future πŸ™‚

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